domingo, 6 de noviembre de 2011

First Project:

1 comentario:

  1. Hi, this is Michael. Good job. Here are a few mistakes you made.

    For the most part your´s is really good. There are just some grammar errors. For example:

    Slide 8:
    Not sure I understand what The Package is. You might want to consider rephrasing a few sentences.
    To catch is irregular. The past tense is caught, not catched.
    It´s spelt catches not catchs.

    Slide 9:
    prepared, not ´´prepare´´.

    You might want to run you sentences in Microsoft Word or another word processor. They´ll usually catch spelling errors and sometimes grammar mistakes.

    Great job

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