martes, 24 de enero de 2012

1000 cranes for peace.

Conflict: Homophobia.

To begin with, do you know what is homophobia?
   Well, if you don't, I will tell you, Homophobia is a range of negative attitudes and feelings towards homosexuality and people who are identified as or perceived as being homosexual.

Sometimes relationships of people from the same sex are not accepted. In the school environment this can be a really big problem, because if one person starts to bully them, then others will follow him, so he or she, the person who's being bullied, will feel like the worst person in the world.
Do you know any case of homophobia?

    Luckily, I don't know any around me, but if you know someone who is bullied, or someone who bullies homosexuals, you should tell him/her to STOP, because homosexuality is NOT a sickness, they're just like us, but with different likes.

1 comentario:

  1. Great job. There were some grammar errors that I corrected below. Try reading what you write out loud. If it doesn't sound right to you chances are something might be wrong. Changes are in "quotations" and comments are in (parenthesis).

    In the school “environment this” can be a really big problem, because “if” one person “starts” to “bully” them, then others “will” follow “him. Eventually” the person who's “being” bullied, will feel “like” the worst person in the “world.”

    (I'm not sure what you mean by '...and can act without thinking.' Who acts without thinking and how? You might want to reword it.)

    ...someone who is bullied, or someone who "bullies"...

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